"but she infinite willpower and resources at her disposal"
need a "had" between "but" and "she".
also:
One day, she couldn’t find her way back to her apartment. She wound up at one of the many little cafe’s that dotted the Island, and sat down to sip at a tea for an hour.
*Credits: Alexey Guzey’s “New Science,” Noahpinion’s “Decade of the Battery,” Dan McKinley’s “Choose Boring Technology.”
s/No IRB committee’s/No IRB committees
s/hold it’s own yacht/hold its own yacht
typo:
"but she infinite willpower and resources at her disposal"
need a "had" between "but" and "she".
also:
One day, she couldn’t find her way back to her apartment. She wound up at one of the many little cafe’s that dotted the Island, and sat down to sip at a tea for an hour.
"cafe's" shouldn't have that apostrophe, I think.
Fixed, thank you!