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Milli's avatar

I really liked the story but the "me" and "you" got me confused in the beginning. Is the point that a p-zombie needs someone to direct the story at because it doesn't exist in a vacuum?

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Sol Quy's avatar

If I rewrite this, I'll go back and make it more obvious from the get-go!

I think the idea is that a p-zombie writing a memoir will always use first-person, because that's what a sentient would do. In the story, "you" refers to the daughter Jessica, as in this is a letter that is addressed to her. I wonder if I should explicitly make this a letter from the beginning...

Appreciate the comment!

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